Wednesday, April 28, 2010


                                                         Ek Aasha-Koi Mujhe bhi Kahe-MAA

Nimmo ki shadi ko abhi 10 mahine hue he.. aaj thodi chinta me he.. ki kahi uska pregnancy test positive naa aa jaye.. par jaise hi pata chala ki wo maa bannae wali he uski khushi ka thikana na raha. EK hi pal me itna badlav? Shayad pehle sirf ek ladki dar rahi thi magar ye ek maa ka dil tha jo apni kokh me apne bachhe ke aane se phula nahi sama raha tha. Ye khabar sun kar to sabki khushi ka thikana na rahi. Nimmo or sameer ke beech me jo thodi bhaut durian thi wo is bache ke aane ki khabar ne khatam si kar di.

Sameer nimmo ka jayda khayal rakhne laga he or apne aane wale bache ke liye bhaut utsuk he. Doctor ne bahut sare test likh diye he. Sare reports sahi he par ultrasound me bacha 4 hafte ka ho chukka he or dil ki dhadkan nahi he or asaliyat me bacha 7 hafte ka hona chahiye doctor kehte he ki 2 hafte me sudhar nahi hua to garbhpaat karna padega. Ye sun kar nimmo ki aankoan ke annsu rukne ka naam nahi le pa rahe manno us par vajrapaat ho gaya ho. Sameer bhi stambdh rah gaya. Par ek umeed banki he ki shayad sab thik ho jaye.

Ab sameer nimmo ki or dekhbhal karne laga he. Sab ghar wale nimmo ki dekhbhal me lag gaye he. Bistar se zameen par per nahi rakhne dete. Sab iss umeed par he ki shayad ab sab thik ho jaye. Par kahi na kahi ma ko lag raha he uska bachha use dur jane wala he. Par phir bhi ek aas banki he. Jaise taise 2 hafte guzar gaye doctor ke paas jane ka samay aaya par pata chala abhi koi sudhar nahi he. Doctor ne 2 hafte or rukne ko kaha. Sab taam jham karke dekh liya. Kayi or doctors ko bhi dikyaha par sab ka ek hi kehna tha is bache ki koi umeed nahi. Ankhir haar kar unhe garbhpat karana pada.


Nimmo ki aankhon ka to jaise nur hi chala gaya. Saare sapne dhare ked hare reh gaye. Wo phir akeli ho gayi . usko kokh phir se suni ho gayi. Us din nimmo apne aap ko itna bebus or lachar mehsus kar rahit hi. Ki jaise uske haath me kuchh na ho or wo bachha usse dur se keh raha heo "Maa tu to mujhe chahti hi nahi thi isliye me chala gaya". Ab uske paas num ankon ke siwa kuchh nahi he. Aaj ek saal ho gya he.. nimmo ko to bus intazaar he apne us bache ka jo use ruth kar use kahi dur chala gaya he.. par ussi ummed he uske wapas aane ki………………..wo pathraiyi si ankhe aaj bhi apne bache ki raah dekh rahi he………………………

8 comments:

  1. are waah... maine aaj hi dekha tera blog... v.gud keep it up..

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  2. nice work pink good selection of words and nice frame..keep it up :)

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  3. अच्छा लिखा गया है ,लेकिन हिंदी को हिंदी (देवनागरी ) में लिखें तो अधिक आनंद आयेगा ।

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